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Hannah

Page history last edited by superstarhannah 9 years ago

 

Timid, vivacious, kindhearted, creative

Cousin of John and Jerome,

Lover of her family, the fine arts, and animals,

Who feels happy when listening to music and reading a good book

Sad when her loved ones pass away,

Scared of being stuck in eternal darkness,

Who needs help with confidence,

Who gives all to everything,

Who fears arachnids,

Who dreams of her seeing her family from Malaysia more offen,

 Resident of Helotes, TX

 

 

Street Music

(Inspired by Arnold Adoff)

 This street has the morning sun captured perfectly every morning,

While the birds sing gaily, tweet, tweet.

The tree surrounding us makes the air sweeter than ever,

as laughter echoes around us.

Musical melodies of

Ahhh

He Ha

Hmmm

Fill the air as gentle autumn breezes whisper in our ears, sssss,

And humming birds twitter and tweet as they speed by,

 while winds dance gallantly while we sleep in the star filled sky,

Street music.

 

Narwhals

Social, family-orientated,intelligent, long-tooth,

Cousin of Beluga whales,

Lover of pod members,Greenland cod, and shrimp <3,

Who feels happy when weaving though the melting glaciers,

  Sad when global warming takes a toll on their environment,

Scared when poachers are in the area 

   Who needs help facing the Orcas that patrol their habitat,

Who gives the Narwhal Tusk Black Market their teeth (not that they want to), 

Who fears Poachers, Orcas, globe warming 

Who dreams of the ice caps NOT melting

Resident of Canada,Greenland,Europe,Alaska.

 

 

Comments (26)

superstarlindsay said

at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Hannah you have an open mind of smartness!

superstaremily said

at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Love the adjectives you put. Can't wait until the poem is done! ;-)

superstarmarlena said

at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Amazing!!!!!!

superstartrevin said

at 12:20 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Awsome adjitiv

superstartrevin said

at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Oops. I meant awesome adjectives

superstarjose said

at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Good job.

superstaranna said

at 12:22 pm on Aug 29, 2014

you are very caring and thoughtful, creative I love theme all.

superstaraudelia said

at 12:22 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Great job!!

superstarlindsay said

at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Loved it Hannah please comment to mine.

superstaremma said

at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014

So true. You are a great writer!!

superstargracie said

at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Wow Hannah u have lots of coments

superstarlindsay said

at 3:29 pm on Aug 29, 2014

because shes the first one, everybody clicks on the first person. :D

superstarjose said

at 9:08 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Your brain works really good

superstarmitchell said

at 10:06 am on Sep 2, 2014

I love your use of word choices.

superstarkalea said

at 10:07 am on Sep 2, 2014

perfect for you

superstarmarlena said

at 3:09 pm on Sep 2, 2014

Great choice of words!

June Shanahan said

at 6:00 pm on Sep 2, 2014

Your adjectives = perfection!!!! *I love how you think!*

superstarhannah said

at 8:19 am on Sep 3, 2014

Thank you so much!!you are all so kind!!!

June Shanahan said

at 5:32 pm on Sep 3, 2014

Scared of being stuck in eternal darkness, <--- This sentence will make me have scary nightmares. YIKES!!!!!! I'm scared! I never even thought of being scared of eternal darkness!!!! A++++

superstargracie said

at 9:58 am on Sep 9, 2014

I love that shade of Blue.

superstaremily said

at 9:54 am on Sep 15, 2014

Lovely name darling!

superstarlindsay said

at 9:32 am on Oct 3, 2014

Love the poem!

June Shanahan said

at 8:56 pm on Nov 21, 2014

My favorite part of this week: when you stood up in front of class and taught (with the teacher pointer stick!) You were BRAVE! And we learned so much from you. :-)

June Shanahan said

at 7:43 pm on Apr 6, 2015

Animal poem - so far, you have 100%!

June Shanahan said

at 4:37 am on Apr 8, 2015

Don't forget to add punctuation.

June Shanahan said

at 7:10 pm on Apr 8, 2015

Don't forget to add a narwhale photo or graphic.

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