Timid, vivacious, kindhearted, creative
Cousin of John and Jerome,
Lover of her family, the fine arts, and animals,
Who feels happy when listening to music and reading a good book
Sad when her loved ones pass away,
Scared of being stuck in eternal darkness,
Who needs help with confidence,
Who gives all to everything,
Who fears arachnids,
Who dreams of her seeing her family from Malaysia more offen,
Resident of Helotes, TX
Street Music
(Inspired by Arnold Adoff)
This street has the morning sun captured perfectly every morning,
While the birds sing gaily, tweet, tweet.
The tree surrounding us makes the air sweeter than ever,
as laughter echoes around us.
Musical melodies of
Ahhh
He Ha
Hmmm
Fill the air as gentle autumn breezes whisper in our ears, sssss,
And humming birds twitter and tweet as they speed by,
while winds dance gallantly while we sleep in the star filled sky,
Street music.
Narwhals
Social, family-orientated,intelligent, long-tooth,
Cousin of Beluga whales,
Lover of pod members,Greenland cod, and shrimp <3,
Who feels happy when weaving though the melting glaciers,
Sad when global warming takes a toll on their environment,
Scared when poachers are in the area
Who needs help facing the Orcas that patrol their habitat,
Who gives the Narwhal Tusk Black Market their teeth (not that they want to),
Who fears Poachers, Orcas, globe warming
Who dreams of the ice caps NOT melting
Resident of Canada,Greenland,Europe,Alaska.
Comments (26)
superstarlindsay said
at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Hannah you have an open mind of smartness!
superstaremily said
at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Love the adjectives you put. Can't wait until the poem is done! ;-)
superstarmarlena said
at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Amazing!!!!!!
superstartrevin said
at 12:20 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Awsome adjitiv
superstartrevin said
at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Oops. I meant awesome adjectives
superstarjose said
at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Good job.
superstaranna said
at 12:22 pm on Aug 29, 2014
you are very caring and thoughtful, creative I love theme all.
superstaraudelia said
at 12:22 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Great job!!
superstarlindsay said
at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Loved it Hannah please comment to mine.
superstaremma said
at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014
So true. You are a great writer!!
superstargracie said
at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Wow Hannah u have lots of coments
superstarlindsay said
at 3:29 pm on Aug 29, 2014
because shes the first one, everybody clicks on the first person. :D
superstarjose said
at 9:08 pm on Aug 29, 2014
Your brain works really good
superstarmitchell said
at 10:06 am on Sep 2, 2014
I love your use of word choices.
superstarkalea said
at 10:07 am on Sep 2, 2014
perfect for you
superstarmarlena said
at 3:09 pm on Sep 2, 2014
Great choice of words!
June Shanahan said
at 6:00 pm on Sep 2, 2014
Your adjectives = perfection!!!! *I love how you think!*
superstarhannah said
at 8:19 am on Sep 3, 2014
Thank you so much!!you are all so kind!!!
June Shanahan said
at 5:32 pm on Sep 3, 2014
Scared of being stuck in eternal darkness, <--- This sentence will make me have scary nightmares. YIKES!!!!!! I'm scared! I never even thought of being scared of eternal darkness!!!! A++++
superstargracie said
at 9:58 am on Sep 9, 2014
I love that shade of Blue.
superstaremily said
at 9:54 am on Sep 15, 2014
Lovely name darling!
superstarlindsay said
at 9:32 am on Oct 3, 2014
Love the poem!
June Shanahan said
at 8:56 pm on Nov 21, 2014
My favorite part of this week: when you stood up in front of class and taught (with the teacher pointer stick!) You were BRAVE! And we learned so much from you. :-)
June Shanahan said
at 7:43 pm on Apr 6, 2015
Animal poem - so far, you have 100%!
June Shanahan said
at 4:37 am on Apr 8, 2015
Don't forget to add punctuation.
June Shanahan said
at 7:10 pm on Apr 8, 2015
Don't forget to add a narwhale photo or graphic.
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