Intelligent, sport lover, bulky, creative,
Brother of Jacky, Daniela, Celeste,
Lover of his baby horses, dogs, family,
Who feels happy when playing baseball, riding horses, feeding animals,
Sad when his dog died, grandpa died, mom got an infection,
Scared of clowns, Chucky, mountain lions,
Who needs help on math, reading,
Who gives candy on Halloween,
who fears ghost, dog claws,
who dreams of being the president and winning the lottery,
Resident of Helotes, Texas
Street Music
The noise in my neiborhood is like
Honk,
Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,
Nahhh,
Bark,
cccrrack,
the noises in my neighborhood are very loud,
like the horn on a car.
These words have a lot of power,
because they have a sound like,
whoosh,
beep,
doink donk doink,
vroom!
My neighborhood has a lot of friendship
because we help each other with
problems
and other related things.
Comments (13)
superstarlindsay said
at 12:06 pm on Aug 29, 2014
loved the words you put
superstarjoseph said
at 12:11 pm on Aug 29, 2014
like your name :)
superstaremily said
at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014
REALLY LOVE THE ADJECTIVES!!!!....opps all caps!
superstarsophia said
at 10:06 am on Sep 2, 2014
I love your adjectives. There so boy-like. :P
June Shanahan said
at 6:04 pm on Sep 2, 2014
What a great comment, Sophia! I agree with you!
June Shanahan said
at 6:06 pm on Sep 2, 2014
I love the word BULKY. I want to be BULKY too!!!!! I definitely know you are intelligent, and I've known it since the first day of school. (Dude, you look even MORE intelligent with your glasses. Seriously.)
June Shanahan said
at 5:23 pm on Sep 3, 2014
Your poem should be published in a book of poetry. That's how much I love YOUR WORDS! *I want to see your baby horses. Can you email me a picture? Or bring some pictures in? PLEEEEEEASE!
June Shanahan said
at 9:18 am on Sep 5, 2014
Mr. Poetic
superstarjoseph said
at 9:22 am on Sep 5, 2014
Mr. Poetic strikes Again!
superstarlindsay said
at 3:09 pm on Sep 5, 2014
Cool you put horses!
Sharon Creech said
at 6:38 pm on Oct 10, 2014
I like your friendship neighborhood! xx
superstarjose said
at 1:24 pm on Dec 9, 2014
thank you
June Shanahan said
at 7:48 pm on Apr 6, 2015
I can't wait to read your Blob Fish poem! :-)
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