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Mitchell

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Athletic, mathematical, hilarious, awesome, 

Brother of Andrew and Lauren,

Lover of his family and the sports that he loves,

Who feels happy when he wins a game and when he gets good grades.

Sad when he loses a game and feels like he failed himself and others,

Scared when there's a turning point in everyday tasks,

Who needs help with improving everyday,

Who gives confidence and hope  to others,

Who fears failure in life and not accomplishing certain things.,

Who dreams of being a great person with an athletic career,

Resident of

Helotes,T.X.

 

 

Mitchell

Street Music

Inspired by Arnold Adolf

The street is filled with all sorts of sounds,

Cars zooming and speeding by,

The laughs of the kids playing in the street,

The smack and the crash of the work trucks building new homes,

The howl of the Coyotes out at the full moon,

The loud music coming from a mile away that keeps me up almost every night,

The ka boom of the dynamite from the limestone quarry down the road over and over again.

The vision of the stars in the night sky.

 

 

 

 

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Beavers

Woods man ,powerful, Productive, rodent,

lover of trees,

Castridodae

largest rodent in north America,

Skin flaps behind their teeth,

chainsaw like teeth,

stays with there young ,

mates for life,

who gives Large incisors, and

a flat tail, to there young,

Fears foxes and poachers,

resident of North America, and parts of Russia.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (13)

superstarjose said

at 12:13 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Nice words.

superstarclint said

at 12:13 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Mithchell nice job!

superstartrevin said

at 12:14 pm on Aug 29, 2014

AWSOME,I put some of those SAME WORDS!!!!

superstaremma said

at 12:15 pm on Aug 29, 2014

You must be a great writer!! So true.

superstarriley said

at 12:15 pm on Aug 29, 2014

I loved your adjectives

superstarweston said

at 12:18 pm on Aug 29, 2014

I agree that you are athletic

superstarlindsay said

at 12:20 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Loved your adjectives!

superstarjohnie said

at 12:21 pm on Aug 29, 2014

I like the words you used.

superstarmitchell said

at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014

thanks.

June Shanahan said

at 6:19 pm on Sep 2, 2014

Your adjectives are EXCELLENT!!! (And oh so true.)

June Shanahan said

at 4:59 pm on Sep 3, 2014

Please place a comma between your city and state. (ex: Helotes, Texas) Please name a specific "thing" you would like to accomplish. Zoom in to the details.
*I loooooove your writing. You are oh so honest, and that takes courage.

June Shanahan said

at 8:04 pm on Apr 6, 2015

Love, love, love your poetry! xoxoxo
Suggestion:
Please change this line:
stays with there young ,

to this...
stays with THEIR young,

June Shanahan said

at 4:56 am on Apr 8, 2015

Please add capitals on the first words of all lines of poetry, but remove capitals that are at random places within the midst of your poetry. Raise your hand, if you don't know what I am talking about.

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