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Weston

Page history last edited by superstarweston 8 years, 12 months ago

 

Energized, determined, thunderous, innovative  

Good friend of Christopher,

Lover of warfare action and technology,

Who feels happy when around his friends and family,

Sad  when he can not see his friend,

Scared when he sees a lightning storm coming his way,

Who needs help with goals of all kinds,

     Who gives love and passion to everyone he meets,  

Who fears his imagination when it gets dark,

Who dreams of himself being a hero in many ways,

Resident of Helotes, Texas. 

 

 

 

The Street

Inspired by the author of Street Music

 

The endless noise of my street,

Always saying

Screech!

Bang!

Thwack!

When you look in the direction of the sound,

You cannot see it because of tall hills,

As you walk, you can see pebbles.

When you touch them,

Your feelings appear and you can hear

drip, plop,

 

As it falls dark,

You can hear howls of wind and breath,

Bong, pong, dong!

You hear from a ball from down the street,

 

The road is stained from animals that have graves,

Do not breathe,

Because there is

blood

within

the

air,

 

Bong, tack, clack, whack!

You hear from the other side of the street,

Do not walk alone,

For there is lots of pain on the road,

 

Whack!

You hear on uneasy sides that curve to the end,

Do not let things go,

For that will be the end of them,

on

this

street!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

       Belugas

 

    Friendly, curious, mammal, intelligent

  Star of very funny show,

    Lover of fans that adore him, playing, tuna, and summer,

Who feels happy when fed a tuna,

Sad when no one shows up to his show,

Scared when he sees a polar bear at shore, 

Who needs to stop tipping fishing boats over,

Who gives joy to families that go to the zoo to see him,

Who fears getting left on shore when the high tides go in and a polar bear finds him,

Who dreams of having legs and observing the one they call people 

 

 

 

 

Image result for beluga tipping over boat

 

 

 

 

     

 

Comments (11)

superstartrevin said

at 12:23 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Great use of adjectives

superstarlindsay said

at 3:33 pm on Aug 29, 2014

Yep, great use of adjectives

June Shanahan said

at 6:14 pm on Sep 2, 2014

Weston,
One of my favorite words is THUNDEROUS!!!!! You did an amazingly great job of selecting your adjectives, Weston!!!!

superstarmitchell said

at 8:21 am on Sep 3, 2014

I love your use of words.

June Shanahan said

at 5:09 pm on Sep 3, 2014

Who fears his imagination when it gets dark,
Who dreams of himself being a hero in many ways,

The above two lines are my all time favorites!!!!!! *Your words have POWER!

June Shanahan said

at 8:15 am on Oct 5, 2014

Weston,
I'm too scared to ever walk down your street!!!!! And if I ever do, I will never, EVER, under any circumstances, let anything go on your street!!!!

June Shanahan said

at 8:16 am on Oct 5, 2014

Thanks for giving me scary nightmares! ***I love your writing!***Keep scaring me.****

superstarmitchell said

at 12:48 pm on Apr 6, 2015

I love your Beluga Whale Poem.

June Shanahan said

at 7:56 pm on Apr 6, 2015

I love, love, love your poem.
Suggestions:
Please change...curia's to curious.
Change adorn to adore.
family's to families

fells to feels
Change

superstarweston said

at 10:04 am on Apr 8, 2015

Thanks for heads up

June Shanahan said

at 10:41 am on Apr 11, 2015

I'm happy to help you get an A+.
More: add a graphic and add punctuation at the end of your last line please.

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